Jan
26
I need some help with a concluding sentence PLEASE?
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cutie317 asked:
so i wrote a paper on models and the skinny trend, and how it influences girls, and i wrote in my conclusion how i think that measuring BMI is not the answer, because of ppl being naturally skinny nad having high metabolism, and how ppl need to have special bodies in that industry, just like ballerinas and jockeys, but i also said that something needs to be done about this problem because of girls dying and starving themselves. that is MY OPINION. what should my concluding sentence beee?? THANK YOU!! this is my final paper.. i know its a weird topic but lol we got 2 choose and stuff.
ALPHONSE
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so i wrote a paper on models and the skinny trend, and how it influences girls, and i wrote in my conclusion how i think that measuring BMI is not the answer, because of ppl being naturally skinny nad having high metabolism, and how ppl need to have special bodies in that industry, just like ballerinas and jockeys, but i also said that something needs to be done about this problem because of girls dying and starving themselves. that is MY OPINION. what should my concluding sentence beee?? THANK YOU!! this is my final paper.. i know its a weird topic but lol we got 2 choose and stuff.
ALPHONSE